Day 4: Extra-embryonic membranes: bad grammar + typo

Forum: Chickscope Development Forum
Date: Mon, 16 Mar 1998 22:56:45 GMT
From: Martin Ceperley <mceper@uni.uiuc.edu>

At Day 4: Extra-embrypmoc membranes, the last paragraph entitled "The Chlorio-Allantoic Membrane", there is a sentence near the end with 2 mistakes I think. "But at around day 10, ..." First of all it shouldn't start with but. Second, there should be either "at" or "around", not both. http://chickscope/explore/embryology/day04/4Focuson_1.html

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